intravenusann (![[info]](http://www.insanejournal.com/img/userinfo.gif){kind=small} intravenusann) wrote, |
... oh hot damn.
Well, now I feel uncomfortable.
I HAD TO LOOK UP WORDS TO UNDERSTAND THAT. :D I love you~
The first is spectacularly ON. I have no complaints.
However, ah, your lack of understanding about how boy bodies work becomes way more obvious in writing. :x I mean, I doubt you'll get any readers who care. But... First of all? It is INSANELY hard to pee when you've got an erection. In fact, a full hard on will cut off the urethra (which is why they tell you to call if you have an erection longer than 4 hours on TV. Priapism cuts off the urethra and ends up causing bladder and kidney problems after too long.) However, losing erections? Yeah, it's about that easy. And that was more flagging off. Ah, ejaculation is way messier than that, but it's cool. I just mentally edited in Sephiroth cleaning Lazard up as well as himself. Cause that's hot.
Speaking of which... that's hot. I mean seriously. And I like that you're using my fanon~ Whether you accept that you are, or not. It makes me go like this :3... Also, reading this made me feel as physically and morally uncomfortable as Lazard and that is ... yeah. Just... Yeah.
Well, now I feel uncomfortable.
I HAD TO LOOK UP WORDS TO UNDERSTAND THAT. :D I love you~
The first is spectacularly ON. I have no complaints.
However, ah, your lack of understanding about how boy bodies work becomes way more obvious in writing. :x I mean, I doubt you'll get any readers who care. But... First of all? It is INSANELY hard to pee when you've got an erection. In fact, a full hard on will cut off the urethra (which is why they tell you to call if you have an erection longer than 4 hours on TV. Priapism cuts off the urethra and ends up causing bladder and kidney problems after too long.) However, losing erections? Yeah, it's about that easy. And that was more flagging off. Ah, ejaculation is way messier than that, but it's cool. I just mentally edited in Sephiroth cleaning Lazard up as well as himself. Cause that's hot.
Speaking of which... that's hot. I mean seriously. And I like that you're using my fanon~ Whether you accept that you are, or not. It makes me go like this :3... Also, reading this made me feel as physically and morally uncomfortable as Lazard and that is ... yeah. Just... Yeah.